Oh, really nice new maps are coming so fast. Urukhai concept of your map is good but it seems to me you should work a bit more especially on design pallete - it means scenery and tiles elements. There are a few mistakes which aren't look so good. So what you should fix:
1. Scenery:
- remove/replace old/rusty/brown (whatever how you call it) machines because they don't fit to high tech BOS bunker, these machines are good for old vaults or power plant as Gecko but not for advanced bunker
- remove/replace elements from "clean vault" (vault 8/vault13) because they do not fit to BOS bunker pallete
- add a bit more scenery from BOS bunker pallete, well you can add more computers, machines, logo of BOS etc - you should open bos_lh_x maps from 2238 sdk and see how they are builded
- remember to place containers in wisely way
2. Tiles (yeah again):
- use correct tiles which are for BOS bunker pallete, do not combine tiles which are used for other bunker types. Why Am I talking about it? Because right now your map has so many different tiles and believe me it is not professional
Well, I hope you will work on this map more and improve it. Don't get me wrong that I teach you because I'm just longer in this topic.
Hah I already mapped stuff months ago but on FO: Desert Europe ! I posted a screen on one of these topics.
The thing is, my mapper is bugged. I cannot slide back to get other tiles and walls. As you can see on my screen, my tool board is in "full mode"
Other thing, I was inspired by the original bunker of the bos_lh_x It's pretty dark, and overcrowded with this useless shit like banners, emblems, boxes etc. This is the reason why it looks so "empty".
The tiles I've chosen IMHO ofc, weren't chosen randomly ! The entrance on the right has special tiles for cars and concrete tiles outside, which is normal. Black tiles are used by BoS and grey only for gym and the bathroom. You can notice that in every big building, if you have there a bathroom the floor is made of ceramic tiles.
I can add some more containers, but placing many of them next to the workbench, is logic.
All walls are high-tech, as by BoS.
The World Map, is mostly present in vaults, but if you played New Vegas, in BoS bunker, this map is present.
Rusty machines, the one in top left corner is a kind of water filter. I don't see anything else what I should use... But it can be removed. I'll let Kilgore judge.
As for the electric machines, well they are always working and providing electrcity, may be I'll find something else